I was stressing so much that I decided to sit down with my mum and write the whole storyline out with all the ideas and scenes we already came up with. It’s obviously not the final because you girls might not agree with something but I just had to write it down to make myself feel better…
Flashback! She becomes weird... She starts off drawing pictures nicely but then her other personality is shown as she gets angry and starts to scribble on the paper. Talking to herself, other personality is brought out more. Cutting dolls hair off. Things start to get worse. Flashback! *Other personality tells her to kill herself – evil side dominating* She starts to harm herself with knives, mirror pieces. Cutting her hair off (extensions), screaming, and conversation with evil side. Flashback! *Other personality tells her to kill dad, she kills dad after practicing on dolls. SHE’S LEFT ALL ALONE. Swing then corridor scene. Finish off with forest scene – she can’t take it no more. “SIGH!” Bring out lots of flashbacks of her talking to herself, dad scenes. TWIST SCENE. – SCREAM IN PAIN” Has she killed herself? Long shot of her on the hill (hair blowing, music playing), Close up of her face – SCREAM.
Flashbacks! = Show her past being revealed and why she’s like what she is now…
TWIST SCENE = The audience finally find out it was her who was the other personality.
Dad = Always remained as a silhouette.
Flashback! She becomes weird... She starts off drawing pictures nicely but then her other personality is shown as she gets angry and starts to scribble on the paper. Talking to herself, other personality is brought out more. Cutting dolls hair off. Things start to get worse. Flashback! *Other personality tells her to kill herself – evil side dominating* She starts to harm herself with knives, mirror pieces. Cutting her hair off (extensions), screaming, and conversation with evil side. Flashback! *Other personality tells her to kill dad, she kills dad after practicing on dolls. SHE’S LEFT ALL ALONE. Swing then corridor scene. Finish off with forest scene – she can’t take it no more. “SIGH!” Bring out lots of flashbacks of her talking to herself, dad scenes. TWIST SCENE. – SCREAM IN PAIN” Has she killed herself? Long shot of her on the hill (hair blowing, music playing), Close up of her face – SCREAM.
Flashbacks! = Show her past being revealed and why she’s like what she is now…
TWIST SCENE = The audience finally find out it was her who was the other personality.
Dad = Always remained as a silhouette.
Ooooo Whatcha Sayyyy?.. (8)
Manpreet
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